Final: Peer review

On the Tuesday that had just passed, my group members  reviewed another groups film. They had a really god idea (when it comes to story), though their portrayal need a little work. Ultimately, they did an nice job. It started off with a girl holding a donut to celebrate something ( I birthday I assume), then cut to her being chased by a masked man. The film trailer then cuts to a scene where she helps up a friend (which could have honestly been executed better), where they are chased and murdered. Though the thing is it is all a vision, she is then attacked by the same man though dragged away, as a sort of alternate version. I really liked this idea, and hope they could better their production.